I’ve committed to writing a poem a day for the month of April as part of National Poetry Writing Month.
30th April
A Safebreaker’s Quatern
Phew! Last day of April, and I’m limping over the line with my final ‘poem a day’ for NaPoWriMo. Taking up a challenge from Robert Lee Brewer’s excellent web site, I’ve written a Quatern. My first ever Quatern in fact.
A Quatern, according to Robert, is “a French poetic form that incorporates a refrain like in the villanelle, and eight-syllable lines like in the kyrielle….
- (It) has 16 lines broken up into 4 quatrains (or 4-line stanzas).
- Each line is comprised of eight syllables.
- The first line is the refrain. In the second stanza, the refrain appears in the second line; in the third stanza, the third line; in the fourth stanza, the fourth (and final) line.
- There are no rules for rhyming or iambics.
The refrain, in my example, is “finding the right combination”.
The Safebreaker
Finding the right combination
was trickier than expected
two twists to the left, four twists right
still no sound of turning tumblers
They’d put together the best crew
finding the right combination
brains, brawn, safe breaker. The target:
fifty grand in the old bank vault
Had to sack the last ‘box cracker’
high on booze and cocaine. To him,
finding the right combination
meant mixing whiskey, dope and speed
Turn the dial. Clink! Open the safe
Just a note in a booze bottle:
”Smashed! But still quicker than you at
finding the right combination”
copyright Mike Hopkins 2012