This morning I cycled 22 kms and ran a 5km race before breakfast. Then I did a load of washing, spent the afternoon sanding and painting. Then went to the library, did my week’s shopping and picked my son up. And you still expect me to write a poem today? Well don’t expect it to be a complete one.
This Poem Is Under Construction
it needs a better title
and a first line that says
something the reader
doesnt already know
the middle is coming together
but the format
is
still
a bit
all over the place
it then meandars
without adding anything meeningful.
before coming to a faltering end.
That ending definitely needs a rethink.
And it needs a spellcheck too.
© Mike Hopkins 2014
very amusing!!!
Gracias
Oh, made me grin! Billy Collins-esque.
Must be some subconscious influence
Don’t change a word!
That’s really unique!
Thank you
Expected we did, and you delivered. Even if you were wearing a high-viz vest while doing so. Love the idea (and the poem), Mike! Jen
High viz poetry. A new trend