Poem a Day #26 – Under Construction



This morning I cycled 22 kms and ran a 5km race before breakfast. Then I did a load of washing, spent the afternoon sanding and painting. Then went to the library, did my week’s shopping and picked my son up. And you still expect me to write a poem today? Well don’t expect it to be a complete one.


This Poem Is Under Construction

it needs a better title

and a first line that says

something the reader

doesnt already know


the middle is coming together

but the format



a bit

all over the place


it then meandars

without adding anything meeningful.

before coming to a faltering end.


That ending definitely needs a rethink.

And it needs a spellcheck too.


© Mike Hopkins 2014

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