I’ve committed to writing a poem a day for the month of April as part of National Poetry Writing Month.
27th April
When running short of inspiration, there’s nothing like an insult to get the brain moving. Thankfully, I don’t know anybody who deserves this:
Insult Poem
Your face is like a bag of boils
your hair is like Medusa’s coils
your feet are like two fishing boats
your skin hangs like an empty coat
Your brain must be extremely small
it rarely gets much use at all
thinking’s not your cup of tea
you’d rather stroke your vanity
Never seen when things get tough
avoiding blame, inventing stuff
supposed crimes and violations
Machiavellian machinations
Your face is like a wrinkled prune
oozing puss like a seeping wound
your teeth are yellow, your breath smells foul
your voice evokes a banshee’s howl
You dwell in cracks and under rocks
you’re welcome as a dose of pox
emerging in the dead of night
to seize your prey, inflict your bite
You’re welcome as a plague of mites
you’re known to give us all the shites
a rocking horse is more astute
you’re as appealing as a newt
So now you know the state of play
this is the parting of the way
before you lift your arse to flee
prithee, what thinkest thou of me?
copyright Mike Hopkins 2012
Unlike you to write a love poem Mike…
You know me Russ. Love and hate are close relations.
Some very poetic insults indeed. Remind me not to get on you bad side 🙂
Ah Marianne, shall I compare thee to a …..
Wow how romantic. Oops no. I meant insulting. That’s a seriously great list of insults there Mike. Kind of a cross between Shakespeare and Blackadder. Or maybe just Blackadder, actually! 😉
My poem a day is up now. No insults, just a story.
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Blackadder is up there with Shakespeare in my estimation, so I’ll take that as a compliment: “make love and be merry, for tomorrow you may catch some disgusting skin disease”
This is just too good! Skips everything I dislike about most rhyming poems–you have complex rhyming going on here, great rhythm. And it still manages to be as insulting as hell. 😀
Thanks Lisa. I was concentrating on the insults, so any rhythm is purely co-incidental.
Clearly, you’re a natural. 🙂
This is so darn clever! I’d almost be honored to have this many creative insults directed at me. Only because I appreciate the effort, not because I’m masochistic. I’m not, really. 😀
I love it! It’s really clever!